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- January 4th, 2023, 11:52 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: What's your editing style?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 18070
Re: What's your editing style?
In general, less is more, and this is particularly true if you want to make your work accessible in many forms. Additionally, you may save time, paper, and ink by utilizing Dragon Naturally Speaking 11, which allows you to talk while seeing the screen transcribe your words into text.
- January 4th, 2023, 9:09 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Query critique 12/1/22
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1895
Re: Query critique 12/1/22
I came back because I solved my problem! The story's protagonist, Charley, isn't seen to be actively engaged in any of the action. She is the main character, yet throughout the story everything that happens to her (being led out, betrayed, seeing violence) is caused by events beyond of phrazle her c...
- January 4th, 2023, 9:08 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Page critique 10/20/22
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2046
Re: Page critique 10/20/22
She had been playing and humming the orchestra to the second movement of Liszt's concerto for approximately an hour before she finally put down the piano lid. She would have played longer if it weren't for the severe pain her ankle was in from standing all phrazle day at the school and in the kitche...