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- June 17th, 2010, 11:07 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Incredible Misadventures of Avery Mann Genre: MG Fantasy 250 words SWAT! A piece of paper smacked me across the forehead as I peeked out of the bushes I was hiding in. Flick! Flick! Flick! The paper’s ragged corner stabbed me in the eye several times. Blinking back tears, I yanked the fer...