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by bdwood
July 13th, 2010, 12:07 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 300985

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Reality The man fiddled with his robe, trying not to succumb to the overwhelming pain ripping through his head. He took a breath, steadying himself, as his Master’s voice faded from his brain. Even after all these years, it was impossible to get used to the pure violation. It felt like a hot ...
by bdwood
June 15th, 2010, 12:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 132465

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Nathan, High school is tough. Hormones running wild, teachers out to get you, and girls—well, they’re crazy hard not to look at, but impossible to understand. For Trayvian James, it’s worse than normal. His parents are awol, he doesn’t have a single person he can call a friend, and the only gir...