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by cassdunn
June 15th, 2010, 5:49 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Julia's Well Genre: Women's Literature It’s an insignificant detail, but I remember that it was raining. Not a wintry cold downpour, but one of those unexpected smattering fall rains, the thirsty earth soaking up the water as quickly as it fell, long brown grasses of summer desperate to be gr...
by cassdunn
June 14th, 2010, 9:36 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120871

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

A few years ago, I sat by my uncle’s bedside for six weeks, visiting with him daily, as he died of liver failure. The most painful thing about the experience was the fact that a transplant could have saved him, but his history of alcoholism and age led the transplant board to turn him down. I wanted...