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hello adrian just an opinion. Set the query in present tense. (more immediate) Don't give away the whole book. (spoiler alert) short intro molepeople (make the reader interested in who these folk are without giving it all away) Intro the hero in one or two captivating sentences (make the reader want...

Just an opinion: Start at the tag-line. I like the tag, it is catchy and makes me want to find out more "Not even fate..." Then launch into Markus ( maybe use a more literary term than fox-like). Crystalize your book query into salient points: Give me a hint of who Markus is in one or two ...

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