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Re: Query: The Groundworld Heroes
hello adrian just an opinion. Set the query in present tense. (more immediate) Don't give away the whole book. (spoiler alert) short intro molepeople (make the reader interested in who these folk are without giving it all away) Intro the hero in one or two captivating sentences (make the reader want...
- August 30th, 2022, 8:44 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Fantasy - Born to Battle
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Re: Fantasy - Born to Battle
Just an opinion: Start at the tag-line. I like the tag, it is catchy and makes me want to find out more "Not even fate..." Then launch into Markus ( maybe use a more literary term than fox-like). Crystalize your book query into salient points: Give me a hint of who Markus is in one or two ...
- August 30th, 2022, 8:11 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query:THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL UpmarketFiction
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Query:THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL UpmarketFiction
THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL Some people run from their lives. Some people run for their lives. Refugees know the difference. When the Privileged meet the Powerless somebody’s life will change. John Moradi has never felt anything other than American. He is the celebrity chef with the hottest eatery in LA...
- August 30th, 2022, 7:04 am
- Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
- Topic: BETA reader: "THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL" UPMARKET FICTION
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BETA reader: "THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL" UPMARKET FICTION
Looking for a BETA Reader who is reliable, honest with helpful opinion, polite and prompt. THE OUTBACK GRACE MOTEL Some people run from their lives. Some people run for their lives. Refugees know the difference. When the Privileged meet the Powerless somebody’s life will change. John Moradi has neve...