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by Robert Meacham
July 3rd, 2010, 12:19 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: First Page
Replies: 4
Views: 1240

Re: First Page

Thank you all for the spot on critique. I needed to be more clear about the skydiving. All readers do not know belly to earth is skydiving lingo. I was too exact on the speed while free falling however accurate. Blood rushing hot and fast to the head is probably the least one would feel when anticip...
by Robert Meacham
June 28th, 2010, 10:11 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: First Page
Replies: 4
Views: 1240

First Page

Title: Ponzi Scheme Genre: Mystery Word Count: 175 Cole traveled at 120mph , belly to earth, and anxiously waited for the altimeter to sound off in his helmet announcing the deployment of the main chute. His blood rushed hot and fast to his head when the chute failed...and the emergency chute failed...
by Robert Meacham
June 18th, 2010, 9:22 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120297

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Mr. Bransford: Candida- The Making Of A Princess When twenty-seven year old Candida began pondering her place in the universe, she had no idea that her energy would attract Belial, the demon of destruction. He came to her with voiceless messages, tempting her with power beyond her imagination. ...
by Robert Meacham
June 18th, 2010, 9:04 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 618
Views: 194006

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hey all! Christina , I liked your intro so I went with it. I am Robert Meacham and just joined this forum. I have been following NB blog for some time and I want to participate here. Time permitting, I will participate in queries and excerpts and like Nathan said, I will give much to be able to get ...