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by Gigiza
July 22nd, 2023, 6:01 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 157
Views: 238678

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Thank you, Nathan, for offering this service. Dear Ms Barer, After reading (and loving) LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE, I was thrilled to learn that you're interested in representing a diversity of voices from around the world. May I thus invite you into the world of THE SCATTERLINGS, an adult historical n...
by Gigiza
July 22nd, 2023, 4:28 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Elevator Pitch
Replies: 1
Views: 8797

Elevator Pitch

Hi Nathan, Some websites advise against mentioning both characters in the elevator pitch of a first person dual pov story. Yet some say not mentioning the second character is cheating and gives the story the appearance of a single protagonist. Besides, the logline becomes longer than 25 words. What ...