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by HopeRidesWest
February 19th, 2022, 9:48 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 214
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Thresher: Old Souls Genre: Urban Fantasy First 250 words: I hate witches. To be clear, I’m not talking about the ladies you remember from old reruns of Scooby-doo. You know the ones, all gussied up in black robes and pointed hats. The kind with big, green noses that chase Shaggy and the g...
by HopeRidesWest
February 19th, 2022, 9:41 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 157
Views: 214442

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear XXX {Personalized housekeeping opener.} Magic is a bitch. Ever since his best friend brought him back to life two thousand years ago, Lazarus has spent his days trying to figure out why. What are you supposed to do when the literal Messiah pulls you out of a tomb and then fucks off for all eter...