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by *kristen*isbell*
June 15th, 2010, 8:00 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120840

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

*deep breath* Good Afternoon, Mr Bransford. Scottish university student Nicola Graham doesn’t understand why she’s having such intense dreams involving her young Modernism and Modernity professor, Jamie Ryan. He’s arrogant and pretentious and has been rude to her on several occasions. Nicola’s best ...
by *kristen*isbell*
June 14th, 2010, 10:22 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 284748

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

RUSH; women's fiction; complete. Prologue I closed my phone and practically down the hill to the bus shelter. It still took me ten minutes to get there. The rain slanting in and drenching my clothes made the umbrella useless, but I kept it open anyways. When I arrived at the bus stop he’d said, Jami...