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by charleswhite
May 16th, 2024, 9:37 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 214
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Shrink Genre: Literary Fiction As I watch Leah Houston stroll across my Persian hand-knotted wool rug, I’m haunted by the feeling that my days as a shrink are numbered, part by health, part by ennui. My new patient’s body exudes a metallic smell, like freshly sheared copper, and there is ...
by charleswhite
January 28th, 2022, 8:49 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 214
Views: 264344

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

UNANSWERABLE QUESTIONS Literary Fiction This woman needs love and affection in the worse way, which I’m in no position to give her. How can I support her in attracting those necessities to herself? How can I help her exorcise her demons and get her to pry open up her cedar chest of broken dreams? Dr...