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by J.M. Lava
June 13th, 2010, 10:52 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Deep Calling Genre: YA Contemporary Fantasy Word Count: 231 A sweeping wind came upon Melanie with fingers that were icy and sharp, and as it whistled about her cheek to kiss her skin with dew, a desire to leave shore seared her. The wind sighed into her ear. It travelled down her back and ar...