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- June 13th, 2010, 9:25 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: Losing Rhythm Genre: Chick Lit? Word Count: 182 Her head turned slightly watching her port de bras in the mirror. Her curved arm floated belying the control and tension in every muscle as she worked to keep the illusion of seamless elegance. Losing herself in the music, she perfected the posi...
Hi, I'm Cara. I reside in Texas but live in my words. I am working on my first novel after many stops and starts over the years and wandering aimlessly through genres dragging characters along for the ride. Fortunately, most of my characters were of the flat, emotionally void cardboard variety which...