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- September 1st, 2023, 12:33 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: 101 Ways to Screw Up A Kid Genre: Contemporary Fiction Decades have passed since Caro Dunn needed to steamroll through the grocery shopping and get home to the kids, but she can’t break the habit, so she shops in tandem with Patty early every Saturday morning. With her best friend in tow, she...
- January 30th, 2022, 12:25 pm
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Dear [agent’s name]: Charley Byrne isn’t really living. In my contemporary novel BEAUTIFUL AND TERRIBLE THINGS, the bookstore manager fears something tragic will occur in this, her twenty-ninth year, because she lost her grandparents seven years before and her parents seven years before that. So she...
- September 7th, 2021, 9:42 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: Beautiful and Terrible Things Genre: General Fiction First 250 Words: Charley jerked her head away too late. The scramble of bloody fur on the asphalt imprinted itself on her brain as a shudder coursed through her body. She stopped jogging at the edge of the two-lane thoroughfare slicing thro...