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by giffmacshane
September 10th, 2023, 2:19 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 155
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Thanks for the opportunity. I'd appreciate your feedback on this query. Dear Ms/r Agent, (Begins with personalization based on MSWL or magazine article) An outcast Society belle falls in love with a Navajo man. Can they defeat the woman who’s driven to destroy their happiness? After falling from gra...
by giffmacshane
September 4th, 2021, 6:47 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 211
Views: 182856

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Genre: Historical Fiction/Romance Working Title: Twelve Trees Alicia Beaufort bounced like the kangaroos she’d seen the last time her father dragged her to his Zoological Society meeting. Up and down, up again on the stagecoach seat, until her bones had turned to jelly. Dirt and dust trickled around...