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by Kermit1941
August 13th, 2020, 4:15 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Page 1 Chapter 1 First Novel attempt

¬¬¬¬Coming into Power Chapter 1: Prologue: Introducing the lead characters: Helen sat between her close friends, Slim, and Geova in Slim’s ancient white camper truck with the smooth front bench seat, which Slim had inherited from his grandfather. Every time they rode in that truck, Slim had apologiz...
by Kermit1941
June 11th, 2010, 8:35 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title : Coming Into Power Genre: Science Fiction Fantasy or speculative fiction One sentence plot summary: Helen Troy believed her newly acquired super powers would help her persuade everyone to quit their tobacco addiction, but found it only increased the number of problems to be solved. Chapter 1 ...