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by Barely June
July 10th, 2021, 3:22 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: The Time Capsule Murders: A Cambridge Mystery
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Re: The Time Capsule Murders: A Cambridge Mystery

This was enjoyable. But while obviously intelligent, fun and light hearted, I agree with the other reviewer that the writing style seems dated. Although this is a legitimate style choice, it did get boggy and drag some. Your sentence structure might be to blame. It tends to be complicated and long-i...