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by Michelle4Laughs
June 14th, 2010, 6:36 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 121303

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Mr. Bransford: Marguerite Navarre’s world has forgotten magic. Serious and shy, she is one of the governing race of Argents. Her life is filled with smug, boring people and endless lectures on duty. For longer than anyone can remember, the Argents have lived separately from the more numerous an...
by Michelle4Laughs
June 10th, 2010, 8:05 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 285741

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Heartsouls Genre: Epic fantasy 249 Words She ran and panic choked her. The streets were so dark. Not like her home compound in the center of the city with lights on every corner. Here everything was washed to black and lit only by a faint moon glow. The stone walls of the buildings loomed ove...