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by Danimal98367
October 29th, 2010, 4:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 10/29/10
Replies: 14
Views: 13974

Re: Page Critique Friday 10/29/10

Pretty good start and I would keep reading. I'll echo the earlier comment about starting with a character focus rather than the environment. Knowing it's a future-y world isn't as strong as the peeks at character we got. The details are delicious and perhaps they are fine when the reader has more th...
by Danimal98367
October 4th, 2010, 6:42 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: On stiff drinks, stiff upper lips, and stiffs.
Replies: 2
Views: 704

Re: On stiff drinks, stiff upper lips, and stiffs.

Hmm. That (Do you have a plot? No really, do you?). should have been hyperlinked to Nathan's article on plot inwhich he asks that very question.

Possibly the best article on the subject ever!

http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2008/06 ... -plot.html
by Danimal98367
October 4th, 2010, 4:55 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: On stiff drinks, stiff upper lips, and stiffs.
Replies: 2
Views: 704

On stiff drinks, stiff upper lips, and stiffs.

On stiff drinks, stiff upper lips, and stiffs. By DanG Hill Being an unpublished writer is hard work. It might be hard work than being an actual published writer (I would love to be punished with the opportunity to compare). Rather than commiserating on that point I’ll focus on 3 thought for all str...
by Danimal98367
June 10th, 2010, 12:54 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 261901

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: According to the Prince Genre: Young Teen Fantasy Chapter One By lantern light Prince Andrew, his riding clothes ruffled and dusty, brushed Herbert’s flanks. It could be argued Herbert was the model for princely stallions; tall, strong, and white (except for the almost V-shaped black spot at ...