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- May 5th, 2021, 9:54 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Kolin Grey and The Misty Moors Academy
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Re: Query: Kolin Grey and The Misty Moors Academy
Hello brownwr. I've written a critique of your query below. I hope I don't come across as too harsh. First off, the overall structure of your query is a little confusing. There's quite a bit going on in your first paragraph, which makes it somewhat hard to follow. Is this a story about Kolin and Kai...