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- May 5th, 2021, 6:34 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: Kolin Grey and The Misty Moors Academy
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Re: Query: Kolin Grey and The Misty Moors Academy
I would have been all over this story at the middle grade level, sounds so fun! I noticed a couple of sentences that seem like they could be combined with a comma instead of a period. For example, "A place that chooses not to adopt to modern ways" doesn't have a clear subject, but if you p...