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by KatieBry
August 1st, 2019, 5:09 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 46
Views: 22785

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

I'll Marry You In Dog Years Genre: Rom/com Instead of accepting the date that was probably going to ruin my life, I should have run a singles ad. Or just run. Like to another state. Anyway, my ad would probably be snarky because dating is pretty much the last thing I’m looking at right now. But if I...
by KatieBry
June 9th, 2010, 9:59 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283418

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Silent Betrayal / Suspense As two o’clock in the morning approached, night settled in under a round, buxom moon. Ex-Navy SEAL Lieutenant Commander Dillon Caldwell wouldn’t have picked a night this bright on a bet, but since Sanchez was moving the money tomorrow he didn’t have much choice. Lucky for ...