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by writerdean
June 14th, 2010, 9:26 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 119631

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Shape shifter Alec Graves has spent nearly a decade trying to keep his family from being drawn into open warfare with a larger pack. The arrival of a new student at his school should be a non-event but the more he gets to know her, the more mysterious she becomes. The background checks he's ordered ...
by writerdean
June 9th, 2010, 9:09 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 281413

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Torn Word Count 253 The silvery light of a nearly-full moon should have been comforting. For most people it would've been peaceful even, but it pulled at my anger with surprising strength as I bounded across the arid Southern-Utah terrain. Darkly-furred, four-legged shapes ghosted through the darkne...