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by ashleezak
June 15th, 2010, 6:30 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
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Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Whoever said that technology makes life easier was full of it. For the Colonized Planets, the Artificial Intelligence programs monitor and assist the Colonies, allowing them to remain united and simplifying most daily tasks by administrating the System. With travel, communications, and information n...
by ashleezak
June 9th, 2010, 9:00 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 281464

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Whispers in the Dark Genre: Science Fiction Words: 249 It was supposed to be a routine arrest. The Peacekeepers swarmed in unison, catching the quartet just as the drugs were changing hands. Two of the throwaways were taken without incident, but the rain obscuring the crime scene allowed the ...