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by Unrepentant Escapist
September 3rd, 2010, 4:50 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Old Ask Nathan Thread
Replies: 793
Views: 405201

Re: Ask Nathan

Question: So I've been querying on my first novel for six months or so, and the other day I got a request for a full. Yay! says I. Except when I go back and read the manuscript in question for typos and stuff, I realize I must have puked it out in a drunken stupor because IT IS BAD. I try to revise ...
by Unrepentant Escapist
June 12th, 2010, 5:53 am
Forum: Ask Nathan
Topic: Old Ask Nathan Thread
Replies: 793
Views: 405201

Re: Ask Nathan

Question: If I got a form rejection on a partial six months ago, should I mention that the agent requested to see a previous partial of mine when I query her with my next project? Or is it better to start out with a clean slate? Also, can I just copy and paste the "this is why I'd love to be re...
by Unrepentant Escapist
June 9th, 2010, 11:39 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 451916

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

TITLE: Skin Farm GENRE: Y.A. Post-Apocalyptic/Sci-Fi CHAPTER ONE: DONOR I watched as they took the organs out of my torso one by one and put them in little white boxes filled with crushed ice. The orderlies treated them with care. After all, they were handling government property. Despite their caut...