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by maven
June 9th, 2010, 8:28 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Roaring Rocks Genre: Thriller 248 words Ava strides through the cool, darkened bullpen, the green ticker tape casting reflections on the opposite wall of glass, and as always, she pictures Chase naked. Even though this is Scolman Securities, ensconced on the thirtieth floor of a steel and gla...