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by Daibhin
August 24th, 2010, 1:29 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: In the Shadow of Vesuvius Genre: MG Chapter One On the day I became Remy’s nursemaid the housekeeper took me to the new room on third floor, built especially for the baby’s arrival. The room I would share with the baby boy I had yet to meet gave magnificent views of the Bay of Naples and, in ...
by Daibhin
June 15th, 2010, 11:41 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 118659

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Seeking this Story, I am seeking representation for my 40,000 word YA historical fiction, IN THE SHADOW OF VESUVIUS. Short piece on personal details here. Mira, a teenage slave with power to see the future, must flee Mt. Vesuvius' eruption and her stubborn master to save the baby boy she cares ...
by Daibhin
June 9th, 2010, 8:03 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 278613

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

The Portal Paranormal Mystery 234 words It rained the night I died. Not a heavy rain; more a gentle mist. It moistened my upturned face and the ungainly sack that once was my body, and now lay on the concrete path. Through my dead eyes I watched the clouds part to let the moon peek between them and ...