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by pmccord805
June 9th, 2010, 7:50 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Critique Page for Pam McCord: First Paragraph

First Paragraph The little girl couldn’t have been more than seven. She looked cold and fragile as she sat facing the old tombstone in the deserted tumbledown cemetery. The wind whistled through the branches of the towering oaks scattered throughout the graveyard, rustling the brown and gold leaves ...