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by Pal678
March 29th, 2021, 6:51 am
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Looking for a critique partner for my story
Replies: 0
Views: 1647

Looking for a critique partner for my story

Red Over a beautiful field of golden Lilacs stood a little girl , she held a bouquet of flowers for her mother, who was living three yards from the point she was standing. Beautiful mother was cooking ham with the most lovely smile on her face , a bowl of ice cream and a pile of desserts were lying ...
by Pal678
March 29th, 2021, 6:48 am
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Looking for a critique partner for my story
Replies: 0
Views: 1618

Looking for a critique partner for my story

Soldiers Emma and Jackson fighting side by side against their common enemies which are themselves. Emma was closed in his room fighting addiction , Jackson just experienced breakup with his girlfriend. They both understand the other side of life where roses were rotten and fields are filled with des...