Nathan Bransford - The Forums

I don't feel qualified to review, but it seems to me there's a little too much dialogue for a first page. I think there might need to be a little more set up of the main character so the reader can connect to her. Dialogue is great for advancing the story but not so much for showing the reader who t...

Owning the Path (Women’s Fiction-Historical) October 1944 The silence didn’t alert Kate Fanning to the trouble when she entered the house. Her parents ended their frequent arguments by not speaking, so she was used to quiet. It was the random noise—a slammed cupboard door, a pan banging on the stove...