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by beccajcampbell
June 9th, 2010, 3:47 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Flawed , Book One: Empath Genre: Urban Fantasy/Suspense 235 Words Jade Edwards needed to escape. She had to regain control. The emotional chaos in the room overwhelmed her, crushed her. But how? A wave of irritation hit her like a slap in the face. She scanned the classroom, searching for the...