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by foobard
June 18th, 2010, 9:41 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 118745

Query: The Second Bat Guano War

Attn. Nathan Bransford: Rats ate his baby daughter while he partied in a disco. Now Horace "Horse" Mann is a drugged-out expat teaching English to criminals in Lima, Peru. Oh, and doing the odd favor for the CIA. When his drinking buddy and CIA contact, Pitt Watters, goes missing, Horse's efforts to...
by foobard
June 9th, 2010, 3:03 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 278774

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Second Bat Guano War Genre: Hardboiled Thriller WC: 250 Someone was calling my name. The sound was distorted, a foghorn of death and regret. Jackhammers shattered away from inside of my skull, a reminder of yesterday's excess. "Horse." There it was again. I pinched the bridge of my nose, ...