Search found 3 matches

by vampyr14
February 10th, 2022, 12:24 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 152
Views: 123962

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Agent, I am seeking representation for Standing Too Close, an 82,000 word contemporary YA novel that will appeal to readers who enjoyed books like The Boy Who Stole Houses by C.G. Drews, Far From the Tree by Robin Bennway, Stick by Andrew Smith or Invincible Summer by Hannah Moskowitz. Seventee...
by vampyr14
June 14th, 2010, 2:42 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 183285

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Nathan, Demons have lurked in the shadows throughout Casey’s life, but she has never examined them – until an assignment forces her to drag them into the light. Writing an autobiography involving painful and traumatic childhood memories is no picnic, even as an eighteen-year-old. When Casey mee...
by vampyr14
June 9th, 2010, 2:46 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 451460

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Here goes.... My first 244 words. Title: Assignment 9 Genre: YA- Mainstream NOW He’s going to call on me, I think. He’s going to call on me and I’ll probably puke. There are only twelve of us in this class. Seven boys and five girls. So it will not take too long before it is my turn to present my wo...