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- August 6th, 2022, 10:44 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear [agent], [personalization paragraph] Twelve-year-old Gal has never believed in incantations, Dybbuks, or any amulet her father, a famous exorcist, keeps in his office. That is until she takes a trip with her school to the Western Wall. This is finally her chance to wish her perfect and nasty tw...
- January 22nd, 2021, 8:05 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Shanaz could expose the pharmacist’s biggest fear in less than a minute. No one would notice, of course. Men, women, and children crowded the bazaar, purchasing steaming pita bread from shouting vendors and frowning at overpriced dates. Wedged between an airboat equipment store and a winery, the hea...