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by Avikar
June 9th, 2010, 2:03 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Shadowed Land of Blood and Sunlight Young Adult The mice were not moving, but I could hear their hearts beat through their glass cage. My fingers itched with energy, and I stared at the white tiled floor as I moved. Five steps one way, five back, over and over. “Relax.” Regan leaned against the blac...