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by belaal008
January 5th, 2021, 5:27 pm
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Looking for a critique partner
Replies: 3
Views: 570

Re: Looking for a critique partner

I'm willing to read your questions, but I'm really looking for someone to read my finished chapters and vice versa. You really can't do very much critiquing with an outline.
by belaal008
January 1st, 2021, 3:59 pm
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Looking for a critique partner
Replies: 3
Views: 570

Looking for a critique partner

I just joined this site and I'm looking for a critique partner. Since I'm currently writing the first novel in a multi-book fantasy/scifi series, I'm looking for someone who wants to exchange ongoing work for an indefinite period of time. That could be for a few chapters or a few years depending on ...
by belaal008
January 1st, 2021, 1:22 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: The Time Capsule Murders: A Cambridge Mystery
Replies: 1
Views: 436

Re: The Time Capsule Murders: A Cambridge Mystery

Simplify. Your paragraphs are long and your sentence structure tends to be elaborate and convoluted. You wrote: But more of him shortly; let’s get back to me! Little credit though I can take for the resolution of what has now become known in the more salacious tabloids as The Time Capsule Murders, I...