Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Thank you Emily and Krista for feedback. Very helpful thoughts. Much appreciated. I'm going to work on this a bit and re-post.

Steve

Emily, if you are interested, I have a 1st page excerpt posted for feedback in this forum (steveyoda). I'd love your thoughts if you have a few moments.

Thanks much,

Steve

Skip down to the end to see my overall thoughts. But for starters, I really really like this. I am looking forward to (and hoping for) more. The hallway looked like the inside of a small intestine, a white, exceptionally clean small intestine (I love this opening image, but wonder if it would be mo...

Howdy all. This is a first page. I'd love any feedback you'd like to offer. Thanks much, Steve GENRE: YA Fantasy UNTITLED The day it happened began just like the one before, Theron awoke to the squawking of a crow that seemed to have a liking for his windowsill and the sound of its own voice. The bo...

Genre: Preteen/Early Teen Fantasy The day it happened began just like the one before, Theron awoke to the squawking of a crow that seemed to have a liking for his windowsill and the sound of its own voice. The boy knew it was the same bird as yesterday, and the day before that, and the day before th...

Thank you for all of these extremely helpful thoughts. I don't mean to sound like I'm at an AA meeting, but I thought I was alone. If I'm a writer, a must write. And I will. No matter what.