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by SteveYodaScott
July 28th, 2010, 11:44 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: 1st Page YA Fantasy
Replies: 4
Views: 1179

Re: 1st Page YA Fantasy

Thank you Emily and Krista for feedback. Very helpful thoughts. Much appreciated. I'm going to work on this a bit and re-post.

Steve
by SteveYodaScott
July 28th, 2010, 2:13 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: FOUNDER - Excerpt
Replies: 7
Views: 1521

Re: FOUNDER - Excerpt

Emily, if you are interested, I have a 1st page excerpt posted for feedback in this forum (steveyoda). I'd love your thoughts if you have a few moments.

Thanks much,

Steve
by SteveYodaScott
July 28th, 2010, 2:07 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: FOUNDER - Excerpt
Replies: 7
Views: 1521

Re: FOUNDER - Excerpt

Skip down to the end to see my overall thoughts. But for starters, I really really like this. I am looking forward to (and hoping for) more. The hallway looked like the inside of a small intestine, a white, exceptionally clean small intestine (I love this opening image, but wonder if it would be mo...
by SteveYodaScott
July 28th, 2010, 1:17 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: 1st Page YA Fantasy
Replies: 4
Views: 1179

1st Page YA Fantasy

Howdy all. This is a first page. I'd love any feedback you'd like to offer. Thanks much, Steve GENRE: YA Fantasy UNTITLED The day it happened began just like the one before, Theron awoke to the squawking of a crow that seemed to have a liking for his windowsill and the sound of its own voice. The bo...
by SteveYodaScott
July 20th, 2010, 1:24 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 316276

My Submission for Critique

Genre: Preteen/Early Teen Fantasy The day it happened began just like the one before, Theron awoke to the squawking of a crow that seemed to have a liking for his windowsill and the sound of its own voice. The boy knew it was the same bird as yesterday, and the day before that, and the day before th...
by SteveYodaScott
June 8th, 2010, 4:36 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Procrastination vs. Writer's Block
Replies: 12
Views: 4482

Re: Procrastination vs. Writer's Block

Thank you for all of these extremely helpful thoughts. I don't mean to sound like I'm at an AA meeting, but I thought I was alone. If I'm a writer, a must write. And I will. No matter what.