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by mbelyea
June 12th, 2010, 9:36 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Untitled Genre: Inspirational romance Jack Sullivan looked into the window of Giovanni's, and cursed.  A group of women were clustered around the hostesses stand, laughing and talking. They hadn’t spotted him, but he knew as soon as he walked in that door all mayhem would break loose. Normally, he w...