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by NeilH
December 21st, 2023, 10:10 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 208
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

The Fabled Falcon - A thriller. Fletch had bored many students in his time. Although to his certain knowledge, this was the first time that he, Darrius Spencer Fletcher, Ph.D., Professor of Byzantine and Medieval Art, had actually bored a student to death. The young man was in the front row, sittin...
by NeilH
January 8th, 2022, 6:47 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 208
Views: 181066

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: January's Child Genre: Thriller It had begun to snow again. He stood at the window, peering past the edge of the closed curtains. It was already dark, but the streetlights illuminated all for him to see, despite the falling snow. His name was Matt Sterling, though the name was fiction, like m...
by NeilH
August 22nd, 2020, 7:43 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 208
Views: 181066

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Simeon Scroll Genre: Thriller The man came rapidly out of a troubled sleep. He lay there in the darkness, unsure for a moment where he was. He moved his head cautiously, his eyes gradually adjusting to the gloom, trying to identify what had awoken him, but aware only of the rapid thump o...