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- June 9th, 2010, 8:35 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 720
- Views: 451925
Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Bella Figura Genre: Mystery She came from the sky like an angel. She came toward him, emerging from the clouds as if one of God’s messengers, sent from the heavens to warn him, to protect him. Standing at her funeral three days later, David Isabella remembers watching her fall, wanting to kno...
- May 24th, 2010, 8:55 pm
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
- Replies: 261
- Views: 116650
Re: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
The smoke man wasn't evil incarnate at all... that's the bullshit Jacob was spoonfed and then went on to feed to others, but he himself had no frickin' idea what was true or not. Their mother murdered an innocent woman, then Jacob went on to kill his brother in cold blood. The MIB killed a murdered...
- May 24th, 2010, 12:34 pm
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
- Replies: 261
- Views: 116650
Re: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
What was left unexplained that matters? What exactly the smoke man was. Mom made such a big deal about them going into the cave, but there were bodies from others there all over the floor, so it obviously didn't happen to anyone other than Smokey. That deserved an explanation. The smoke man was evi...
- May 24th, 2010, 9:44 am
- Forum: Procrastination
- Topic: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
- Replies: 261
- Views: 116650
Re: Lost - Possible Spoilers!
I'm trying to understand the disappointment out there. What was left unexplained that matters? What's most interesting to me is the alternate world created by their souls or higher consciousness (or whatever). Did anyone notice how each character idealized him/herself? The con man sees himself as a ...
- May 22nd, 2010, 1:03 pm
- Forum: Writing
- Topic: Book title inspiration!
- Replies: 20
- Views: 13518
Re: Book title inspiration!
From all the discussion, I like "Million Miles Away." It has a little alliteration, and suggests at a complex level what the problem is: MC is a million miles away from her past, or needs to be a million miles away, or is a million miles away from where she needs to be.
Paul
Paul