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- July 21st, 2020, 11:37 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: First Chapter: Knightly (YA)
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Re: First Chapter: Knightly (YA)
Nice descriptive, flowing, writing. Easy to read and it engages the reader.
- July 21st, 2020, 9:51 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.
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Re: The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.
I agree with Nicholas that it comes across as a little rushed and crowded. One way of dealing with that might be to start with the layout of your prose - ie, creating spaces between the paragraphs to allow the words to "breathe" more. This in turn might prompt you to edit the paragraphs th...
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