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- November 10th, 2020, 2:26 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
When the Watcher popped by for its food delivery routine, I was scared. Genuinely frightened. But like always, the Watcher’s painted smile gleamed with an impossible air of friendliness, and the silver, floating machination began rummaging through its bag with its metal claws to give us whatever deh...
- July 13th, 2020, 5:59 pm
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First Page of "The Inner City"
Title: The Inner City Genre: YA Dystopian Prologue “They promised us success. They promised us peace. They promised us happiness.” The Pegasus smiled. She sat back in her chair as she watched the words roll off her keyboard and onto Eudora Master’s lips as she addressed the crowd. The Pegasus, of c...