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by Rainbow Girl
November 10th, 2020, 2:26 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 108
Views: 61737

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

When the Watcher popped by for its food delivery routine, I was scared. Genuinely frightened. But like always, the Watcher’s painted smile gleamed with an impossible air of friendliness, and the silver, floating machination began rummaging through its bag with its metal claws to give us whatever deh...
by Rainbow Girl
July 13th, 2020, 5:59 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 108
Views: 61737

First Page of "The Inner City"

Title: The Inner City Genre: YA Dystopian Prologue “They promised us success. They promised us peace. They promised us happiness.” The Pegasus smiled. She sat back in her chair as she watched the words roll off her keyboard and onto Eudora Master’s lips as she addressed the crowd. The Pegasus, of c...