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- May 12th, 2020, 1:48 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Seeking critique for 8 pages of my work in progress!
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Interesting. It surely captures the interest of the reader. There are a few redundancies, which an editor might be able to point out. Even if the intention was to make the marriage seem rushed, I think you should slow it down a little. It makes it seem like Sita did not have much to say, and everyth...