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by jessica.mcbrayer
May 28th, 2020, 6:10 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 86
Views: 54780

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

First Page Query The Devil's in the Details Jessica McBrayer Mathilda One of my dark teal sling back Manolo Blahniks with crystal accents was the first thing through my private portal into my office. I was a secret shoe slut. Well, maybe it wasn’t so much of a secret. We all have our vices. I always...
by jessica.mcbrayer
May 9th, 2020, 2:44 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 86
Views: 54780

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Nominated page by Jessi.Mcbrayer starting "Mathilda" - Undecided title in Paranormal Romance
by jessica.mcbrayer
May 9th, 2020, 2:39 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 86
Views: 54780

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

First 250 Words Mathilda One of my Manolo Blahniks was the first thing through my private portal into my office. I was a secret shoe slut. Well, maybe it wasn’t so much of a secret. We all have our vices. I always got a rush when I came to work. This place had a lot of residual magik. The house I ha...