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- June 13th, 2020, 7:02 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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For a first page critique. Title - Girl at Sea Psychological Thriller David Burton Chapter One Willing to risk the sting of her husband’s palm, Emily Perrit asked, "Jamie, are you sure you have to go?" as she stood with her husband at the door to the garage. Jamie Perrit let out a deep sigh. "Emily,...