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by 76shibu
April 23rd, 2020, 6:31 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Seeking critique for 8 pages of my work in progress!
Replies: 2
Views: 2364

Seeking critique for 8 pages of my work in progress!

Please critique? How to approach a Yogini By Shibu For Soney “Yoga is the journey of the self, through the self, to the self” - The Bhagavad Gita 1. Powerless to be herself, Sita Johnson jumped off the balcony of her Tuscan home, hidden unassumingly in the suburbs of Atlanta. She had become overwhel...
by 76shibu
April 22nd, 2020, 11:50 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Please review my first 8 pages? Thanks
Replies: 0
Views: 1786

Please review my first 8 pages? Thanks

How to approach a Yogini By Shibu For Soney “Yoga is the journey of the self, through the self, to the self” - The Bhagavad Gita 1. Powerless to be herself, Sita Johnson jumped off the balcony of her Tuscan home, hidden unassumingly in the suburbs of Atlanta. She had become overwhelmed by the steepn...
by 76shibu
April 22nd, 2020, 11:22 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Feedback on whether this has promise?
Replies: 0
Views: 1713

Feedback on whether this has promise?

How to approach a Yogini By Shibu “Yoga is the journey of the self, through the self, to the self” - The Bhagavad Gita 1. Powerless to be herself, Sita Johnson jumped off the balcony of her Tuscan home, hidden unassumingly in the suburbs of Atlanta. She had become overwhelmed by the steepness of exp...