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by Vinayak
April 23rd, 2020, 12:42 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Request a Critique on my current work
Replies: 0
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Request a Critique on my current work

Hi there. I've been stuck on this storyline for around a year now, and I seem to progress halfway, and come back to edit out the old version and i end up writing a completely new version of the same story. I'll post the first chapter here, and i hope i get some critiques on my work. Thanks in advanc...
by Vinayak
March 27th, 2020, 11:44 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 102
Views: 58052

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Name: [Undecided] Genre: Fantasy, Adventure Tripping again was the last thing she wanted. Another moss covered tree root failed her. In a forest of such proportions, Lassa struggled to find a suitable footing. Losing track on the way was frustrating, and now that she reached the cohort, her cohort, ...