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- July 14th, 2020, 4:03 pm
- Forum: Town Hall
- Topic: Edited: Tears of Blood
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Edited: Tears of Blood
Chapter 1 Humble Beginnings “Remember, remember, the 5th of November, gunpowder, treason, and plot.” Guy Fawkes and his cohorts, tried to blow up Parliament in England, in 1605. Guy Fawkes was put to death for his treasonous attempt. However, in 1957, November 5th was a special day for me. It was my...
- March 14th, 2020, 4:50 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.
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The autobiography I'm working on. Please critique me.
The title is: Tears of Blood Chapter 1 Lies and Dreams Lies, lies and more lies. Our parents repeat them in the name of tradition. Santa Claus ruled until you found out the truth. I was 7 years old when I snooped around the upper shelf of the spare room closet and discovered a decorated parcel with ...
- March 14th, 2020, 4:42 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Feedback needed on poem - 'Remember'
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Re: Feedback needed on poem - 'Remember'
Hello,
I loved your poem. I suffer from depression and I love the do's and don'ts. Remember is a powerful word. Good job.
I loved your poem. I suffer from depression and I love the do's and don'ts. Remember is a powerful word. Good job.